Making+sentences+better!

You can put a paragraph or paper for the students to change or improve. We had just worked on great verbs and this is one of the ones that my students did:

Take the following sentence and add adjectives, stronger verbs, and phrases...create an image for me!

I went into the room and sat down.

Mrs. Charlton went into the classroom and plopped on her chair in frustration. Emily Mrs. C sauntered into the classroom and perched on her chair. Daniel Mrs. Charlton went into the smelly room and sniffled on her chair. Lizzy Mrs. Charlton bolted into the room and slid into her chair Colin I tiptoed into the room and snuck into my chair and the teacher didn't even notice I was gone! Anthony Mrs. C danced into the ballroom and twirled into her chair. Mac I went into the room and sat down and devoured my sandwich. Bailey